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  1. Miles Rost's avatar Miles Rost says:

    There are no words to describe what I’m seeing here.

    That is a good thing. Thank you!

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    1. Yes, for me too. No words to describe…great photo and look what it inspired. You should be smiling Miles. 🙂

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    2. Thanks, Miles and thanks for loaning the picture. I was curious where it’s from. I was trying to remember where you were in 2017. I can barely remember where I was, haha.

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  2. Neil MacDonald's avatar neilmacdon says:

    Clever framing device. That made me smile

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    1. Me too. One of David’s best.

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      1. Thank you, my friend. 🙂

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    2. Thanks, Neil. I’m glad you liked it. I like trying new things sometimes.

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  3. Love how you penned this. It’s wonderful to see actual script and not cyber lettering. The story is Vonnegutesque in its imaginings. I simple love it and am gushing like a school girl. Go figure. 🙂

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    1. Thank you for your kind words. It was fun to do since I created the test sheet, even making a logo for the university, then printed it out, wrote it and scanned it in. I had to do it twice since my handwriting was too big the first time.

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      1. You did great. It really made me want to write in longhand, even though my penmanship deserves a fine.

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  4. elmowrites's avatar elmowrites says:

    Fun story – and an interesting way to portray it too. Possibly better this way than trying to drink detergent for 8 years!

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    1. Thanks for reading. Yes, I guess you have to get creative when you’re stuck on a moon far away for years.

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  5. Wow! I love the left turn you took with this! So original and fun. Thank you!

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    1. Thanks, Alicia. I never know how these types of experimental stories will go over, but they’re fun to do. 🙂 Thanks for reading.

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  6. A great piece skillfully presented! Nice one, David.

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  7. GHLearner's avatar GHLearner says:

    I love every tiny bit of this. Brilliant. Perfect. And absolutely logical. Now do the “casa hey” please!

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  8. I like the hand written script. It gives the story a different edge. Well done!

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  9. granonine's avatar granonine says:

    Great imagination here :). The story made me think of the time my DH put ALL the laundry together, including my brand new blue jeans. I guess we’d be known as the blueyz 🙂

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  10. Dear David,

    Very clever presentation. At least if you wash with coffee you don’t have to worry about stains. Love it.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  11. Michael Humphris's avatar Michael Humphris says:

    And I also liked how you presented this. A*

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  12. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

    Interstellar and possibly interdimensional science fiction. Entertaining read, David.

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