Death Mill

copyright David Stewart, story prompt

Death Mill

“It roars through, same time every afternoon, on these metal rails. No one knows from where or to where.”

“They’ve got to lead somewhere. You could follow them.”

“I tried! Walked for, like, an hour. Still going. What’s important, though, it’s great for milling wheat. You put the wheat all along the rails with long troughs underneath to catch the flour. Then the thing does all the work instantly! I call it . . . the death mill!”

“I’ll bet if we could get on it somehow, we could travel really fast.”

“Ride the death mill? It grinds flour, Gary, isn’t that enough?”

22 Comments Add yours

  1. I think this is a FF. If so, nice Rochelle used your photo. Only you would combine wheat with train travel, always practical. Of course my toast this morning will have a new spin. 🙂

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    1. It might also have some oil mixed in with it if you use this method of grinding wheat :). I guess this guy has thought of something to avoid that.

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      1. Oil, I’ll assumes will be olive tells me there’s Italian in you somewhere….:)

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      2. well, if it’s olive oil then you’re halfway to a good meal right there. 🙂

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      3. My ancestors are all hooting from the ether. 🙂

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  2. That’s clever and evocative

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    1. Thanks, Neil. Glad you liked it.

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  3. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz says:

    I am not sure it’s an ingenious invention- but if it’s serving no other visible purpose- I say why not!

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    1. Thanks for reading, Violet. I just it just goes to show that we all see different things when we look at something: a normal train is a flour mill to some people. 🙂

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  4. A very creative take on the exceptional photo. Thanks for providing!

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    1. Thanks, Brenda. I flitted around a few ideas before I landed on this one. Thanks for reading.

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  5. plaridel's avatar plaridel says:

    what a wildly creative spin taking the boredom away. well done. 🙂

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    1. Thank you! Glad you liked it.

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  6. Dale's avatar Dale says:

    Your mind works in wonderfully imaginative ways, David. This was out of the box good! And thanks for the great photo 🙂

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    1. Thanks, Dale! I don’t think I could say how I come up with some stories afterwards, but that’s just inspiration for you. 🙂

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      1. Dale's avatar Dale says:

        Love it!

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  7. So completely out of the box.
    It sounds very dangerous to me, though.

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    1. Yes, insanely dangerous and very inefficient. But that’s part of the absurdity of it. 🙂 Thanks for reading, Dawn.

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  8. Dear David,

    Thank you for your generosity in sharing your photos. 😉

    I would never have thought of milling wheat on a train track. I would think it would be difficult to gather the product. Imaginative story in any event.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Thanks, Rochelle. Personally, I think that would be the absolute worst way of ever milling wheat, but that’s the fun of it, haha. 🙂 Have a great week.
      -David

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  9. Laurie Bell's avatar Laurie Bell says:

    Oh this is so clever
    A practical use but also musing on a train that never stops. You left me pondering the train. Well done

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    1. Thanks, Laurie. I didn’t really decide what kind of world this is or where the train goes. You can decide that part. 🙂

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