Maid My Skin Crawl

Story Prompt: copyright Jennifer Pendergast

Maid My Skin Crawl

“You killed her!” Janice said. We stood regarding the prone figure on the floor.

“I’m sorry!” I protested. “I came out of the bathroom and saw a doll with glowing eyes.”

Matt picked up the doll. “Well, they’re not glowing anymore. What did you do?”

“Exorcism . . . I panicked.”

“Exorcism! How do you know how to do that?”

“YouTube videos.”

Janice sighed. “Sure, she was a possessed doll, but she was helpful. She tidied up. Now we need a new housekeeper.”

Matt looked around. “Maybe her spirit’s still around. Was there a YouTube video on performing a re-inhorcism, by any chance?”

For this one, I thought about going with a sea theme because of the walls but eventually went with this story because of the stuff animals on the floor.

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  1. Reena Saxena's avatar Reena Saxena says:

    Makes me think of a robot and its software (the spirit)…

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    1. yeah, kind of like that. Just need to reboot the doll spiritually, somehow. Or maybe turn it into a robot.

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  2. Love the YouTube line. 🙂

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    1. I use YouTube for a lot of things these days. I haven’t looked for exorcisms, but I’m sure they’re on there.

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  3. Neil MacDonald's avatar neilmacdon says:

    I recommend the summoning demons incantation

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    1. Just don’t end up with a poltergeist. Those are the opposite of the tidying-up sort of spirits.

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  4. Dahlia's avatar Dahlia says:

    The last line made me laugh! 😀

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    1. Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading. 🙂

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  5. Dear David,

    I’m sure there’s a You Tube video for everyhing–how to eat, how to sleep, even how to wear clothes. (Yeah, I had to). I love what you did with the title. Quirky and imaginative as always.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Thanks, Rochelle. Title are hard sometimes so I like when I can think of a good one. Thanks for reading, as always. Have a good week.

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  6. elmowrites's avatar elmowrites says:

    This is that moment in the horror movie where you scream at the TV that they should NOT open that door!

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    1. True, when you wonder how they can’t hear the creepy music.

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  7. granonine's avatar granonine says:

    Creepy. I know some people who are actually afraid of dolls. Maybe they have good reason 🙂

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    1. I can see where the stories come from, even if there is nothing actually spooky about them. They have uncanny faces oftentimes.

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  8. athling2001's avatar athling2001 says:

    Probably better off without her. A human maid would do well. Well done.

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    1. true, at least you won’t have people freaking out when they see a human maid.

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  9. If it’s not you YouTube I guess we really don’t need it! This was a fun story.

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    1. Thanks, Michael. Yeah, you can find basically anything on there these days.

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  10. A doll that cleans?
    Yes, she is creepy, but a doll that cleans!

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  11. They’ll need a video on how to clear up!

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  12. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

    They need to buy a roomba and call it good. No telling what they would bring back. Imaginative storytelling, David.

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    1. Hmm, good point. That’d be a great twist if they did try to get her back.

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  13. Will's avatar Will says:

    A demon housekeeper. Creep story.

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    1. Of course I wonder how this all started. Maybe she was just bored and started tidying up. 🙂

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  14. Margaret's avatar Margaret says:

    Ha! I love this. Such a twist. And ‘re-inhorcism’! What the … ?!

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    1. yeah, that’s not really a word since probably nobody has ever wanted to re-possess someone before. 🙂

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  15. I want that doll too. How I hate housework. Very unique take on the prompt. Great tittle too.

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    1. Thanks! So glad you liked it. Yeah, I’d totally take a doll that did some housework.

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  16. plaridel's avatar plaridel says:

    funny, but you can find almost anything on the internet nowadays. 🙂

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    1. that is true. It’s crazy what’s just on YouTube if you look for it.

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