The Sum of All Games

The Sum of All Games

The field below is an undulating Rorschach test, ten thousand overlapping players forming ever-shifting patterns of dramatic wins and crushing defeats.

Death has freed me from the shackles of linear time but by concentrating, I can distill individual events.

The Championโ€™s memorial is nearest, the crowd standing silently for their lost hero. I move backward, like paging through a book, watching each milestone passed.

Then, I see that carefree boy sneaking in to play, before I was the Champion.

I turn away from the endless night and clutch at those innocent moments that were, in the end, the very best.

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  1. You’re so good at these. You’re my flash fiction hero. ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Thank you, truly. ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. I love the word truly. So old school, so Shakespeare, so romantic. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  2. James says:

    My baseball fan was a ghost, too.

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    1. Great minds think alike, eh? At least in your story Jeff got to eat a hot dog and have a beer. That’s how I want to spend my dead years. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  3. Death has freed me from the shackles of linear time. watching each milestone passed. carefree boy sneaking. clutch at those innocent moments. I can’t choose a favorite line

    I let myself read this twice in order to absorb the meaning. This is very well done.

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    1. Thank you, Alicia. Wow, that means a lot. I appreciate your comments.

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      1. No thanks needed. You wrote a wonderful 100-word story.

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  4. neilmacdon says:

    Beautifully done

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    1. Thanks, Neil. Thank you for reading.

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  5. Sandra says:

    Definitely worth more than a couple of reads. Lovely.

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    1. Thank you, Sandra. So glad you liked it.

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  6. Dear David

    Only you could take a picture of a baseball stadium and turn it into a work of art. Well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Thank you, Rochelle. So glad you liked it. Your comments always make my day.

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  7. msjadeli says:

    And maybe it will be just like that. Good imaginings, David.

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    1. Thanks, Lisa. ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. msjadeli says:

        You’re welcome ๐Ÿ™‚

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