Tuesday Night at the Bliss & Blah

copyright Ted Strutz, story prompt

Tuesday Night at the Bliss & Blah

She sat down purposefully at the bar. The bartender glanced over.

“What’ll it be?”

“A shot of melancholy.”

He raised an eyebrow. “Straight? We’ve got a cocktail that mixes melancholy, nostalgia and wistfulness, with a dash of hope.”

“Straight. With a remorse chaser.”

“Geez, you’re really looking for a bad time tonight.”

“I hurt somebody. I want to feel bad.”

“I’m sure they did something to deserve it. Why don’t I add a few drops of righteous justification?”

“Straight, please.”

Fine, whatever. He was just a sentiment slinger, after all. It wasn’t his job to tell people how to feel.

9 Comments Add yours

  1. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz says:

    Whew! Now that was clever! bravo!

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  2. I really loved this…a bar stocked with emotional coctails. My kinda place. A shot of melancholy comin’ up. 🙂

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  3. James Pyles's avatar James Pyles says:

    Sounds about right sometimes.

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  4. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

    I love that last paragraph. Sentiment slinger indeed. I can tell you’ve cozied up to a few bars.

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  5. Nicely done. Poor barkeep. There’ll be an unburdening to come

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  6. granonine's avatar granonine says:

    Great idea. They say barkeepers are underpaid therapists 🙂

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  7. OMG..this is so cool! I love it.

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  8. Dear David,

    There’s a lot of depth and thought that went into your hundred words. Bravo!

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  9. Nandini Deka's avatar Nandini Deka says:

    loved it…its quite unique take…

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